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Unlucky In Love

by: KM04 (Send Feedback)

Series: - No Series - #1
Chapters: 002 Word Count: 1154
Rating: MATURE
Character(s): Tony DiNozzo, Ensemble, Other Female Character
Category(ies): General
Pairing(s): Tony/OFC
Summary: Tony falls head over heels for Becca a girl he meets in a bar, but one BIG problem stands in the way!

Author Notes: The start of something new!

Chapters: 1 | 2

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Chance Meeting

Tony sat down with another beer after another long day at work, he turned to McGee who was gazing around the room, " So Probie, I heard you slept in the coffinn last week? Pretty hinky huh?". McGee shot Tony a look that said don't even go there. Tony was quizing McGee about his relationship with Abby the forensic scientist. McGee looked away remembering how embarresed he had been when Special Agent Gibbs had found out, he knew he would never hear the end of it.

The two sat in silence, as Tony glanced around the room he noticed the bar was pretty much empty apart from a group of guys making a rucious The girl had mid-length straight brown hair, about 5"5 and looked as if she was in her early twenties. DiNozzo felt his heart beat faster, he was used to chatting up girls and playing the ladies man, he wanted to go and speak to her, but for the firt time far back as Tony could remember he felt nervous. Tony turned to McGee who was admiring the girl in a slightly more obvious way than Tony- his jam had almost hit the floor. WACK! "Owww, DiNozzo, what was that for?" Tony didn't answer though, it was a superiority thing that he had gotten used to, he knew he had no chance with a girl when Tony was around.

They watched the girl approach the bar, " Hey Jimmy, hows things?" The girl chatted away to the barman while he poured drinks. Jimmy, the barman went through the back and Tony felt this was his only oppurtunity to speak to her alone. He gulped down the rest of his beer and loosened his tie and top button and began to stroll casually over to the bar. As he did the girl faced him and winked, she turned and picked up a couple of drinks and made her way back to her marine buddies. She had been eyeing up Tony all night from between the group she was with. WOW, she thought!

She went back to the bar, " Hey there gorgeous, I'm Becca", Tony was lost for words, but managed to say "Tony" and they shook hands. "Can I get you and your friend over there a drink?", as she pointed to McGee who was in the corner looking lost. "Emm... we're ok thanks tho. So are you with any of those guys?", Tony began to go slightly red and Becca laughed, "Several actually! Nah... only kidding. I work with these guys, they're more like brothers to me. What's it got to do with you anyway?", Becca smiled in a cheeky sort of way. Tony was beginning to relax and smiled " Just curious thats all". They chatted for atleast 15 mins more about this and that.

"Thats $34.50 Becca", Jimmy said trying to avoid interupting. "Here you go, keep the change, thanks", Becca replied handing over $40. Beccas faced dropped slightly, "Gees... sorry I gotta go, i gotta long way to travel tonight".

"It was really nice meeting you tonight Tony", she paused and leaned in towards him and kisssed him on the cheek. "Might see you around sometime, I hope,bye". Tony sat there and shock, he had no idea what to do or say. Why hadn't he asked for her number?!

Becca had returned to the group she was with and recieved a couple of pats on the back- "pretty slick there kid", as she moved into the crowd. "Well if one of you girls weren't going to hit on him, then why shouldn't I?" They all laughed, they knew she was winding them up. "Anyway I'm heading to my uncles now, don''t want to get back there too late. Will see you all tomorrow at 1, bye", and with that Becca made her way out of the group. As she made her way to the door, she looked across at the table where Tony was sitting telling McGee all about his chat with her, she winked at him and smiled and then left the bar.

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